Experience

Experience

A Poem by Aristede Craig Jr

you have the worst of me;

 in the box you try to fit me,

but im free,

but im free,

what you don't get?

im free

im here to make you forget

that you thought you knew me

and remember that you must 

truly meet me on the road;

cross my path,

follow the rose petals,

my heartbeat features,

the change in temperatures

and I am hot when you felt cold.

my experience of myself might not ever be told

inside of you,

your point of view is at a different point

stop pointing and just enjoy the view

take me as I take you..

 experience

this free

fall..

stand at the top of the sky and look at universe

and yell "your tall";

and move on because that's not all,

that's not it,

but unless it is your interest

your description is just this;

your description

that's it

now come watch how time and space

bend.

 in your mind

you make time because you need to know when a object fits in that space

 of your mind,

organize

your mind is organizing

 you experience because of it

and im loving it

every fall wasn't a fall I jumped off of it;

a few times a few more

then my tour took a new turn

I noticed open fields weren't like I knew

because I thought I knew,

but I don't know anything

I just experience everything

until I feel like

its part of this thing that I can call knowing

lost minds usually believe they are all knowing

but to know I heard

is knowing you know nothing ....

 

Edet Sira Rambling Poetry

 

© 2013 Aristede Craig Jr


Author's Note

Aristede Craig Jr
if you watch me in these words just experience me and remember the experience... but don't ever say you know me... because you might only know your experiences of me... but that's what I am to you so .... tis is love is all Edet Sira Rambling Poetry

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

"im free

im here to make you forget

that you thought you knew me

and remember that you must

truly meet me on the road;

cross my path,

follow the rose petals,

my heartbeat features,

the change in temperatures

and I am hot when you felt cold."
That is called good poetry...Thank you for sharing...:)


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

"im free

im here to make you forget

that you thought you knew me

and remember that you must

truly meet me on the road;

cross my path,

follow the rose petals,

my heartbeat features,

the change in temperatures

and I am hot when you felt cold."
That is called good poetry...Thank you for sharing...:)


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

450 Views
2 Reviews
Added on April 3, 2013
Last Updated on April 4, 2013

Author

Aristede Craig Jr
Aristede Craig Jr

new orleans, LA



About
A lover striving to be lovely more..

Writing