I Can't Really Write

this is a disguise

I cant really write

in English delight

im not French

nor Spanish

I was banished

my language I attempt at the moment is human

though this looks like English,

its not

im stirring a pot of gibberish

and even people that speak this language

think im sick

I tried to write a essay

and it wanted me to make these things

they call paragraphs

and thesis statements

I misunderstood

and wrote my experience

in which I had none

I had fun

as the rain cleared

and out jumped the sun

the looked me in the eye

and called me a fool

I never turned my paper in

and kept going to school

he handed me more papers

said this should help you

and I took them

and I took them

and I took them

and I took them

and I dropped the class

maybe next semester......... Edet Sira Rambling Poetry

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"I had fun

as the rain cleared

and out jumped the sun

the looked me in the eye

and called me a fool

I never turned my paper in

and kept going to school

he handed me more papers

said this should help you "
At least you are having fun...Lol
A good write...:)

[Baby Ricochet]

"This is crap man I can't publish this. I couldn't write a f*****g grocery list" Yep. I know the feeling. Good write

[sharonlee]

The human language is the one that says the most. Interesting thoughts here.

[Ruth]

Surreal! Much enjoyed, eccentrically so xoxo