Idk Just words(Exist)

Idk Just words(Exist)

A Poem by Aristede Craig Jr

cant get no temptation

no reason to resist

persist the question

..... why I exist

then I stop criticizing

my love,

like its not there

My

God

so above

all

Love of all watch them admit

and dismiss you existence

creating reasons

everyone has excuses

but how do everyone else look at these abuses

 

punishment is just the feeling

of doing wrong

laced in a painful fog

I don't know at  all what I done wrong

I don't know where im going

I just exist as a waste product

I attempt to remain something

I want tp feel

the decisions

hurt me something real

is hurting

maybe I am tempted

im tempted to exist

maybe

temptation brings me some risk

but its my choice

I hear a voice

sounds like its guiding

me to lose it to win

pin everything on me

punishment

has stuck with me

even when im the one punishing

inflicting.. panning

out fading

cant really know anything

but God I have faith in Your Son and You

oh as I chant lovely words one day I will

write this world a curve

so that it swerves and ask where am I?

because we keep moving but don't really ever give a reply

to why we exist when we are busy existing ........

 

© 2013 Aristede Craig Jr


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I really love this one! I really love the Christian vibe and theme. I like how it explores the existential side of things, and is truly deep. Great rhythm to it as well. I also like the title, even though it looks like you were kind of just throwing it out there. Sometimes the casual "throwing it out there" vibe can be great. Terrific work all around.

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I really love this one! I really love the Christian vibe and theme. I like how it explores the existential side of things, and is truly deep. Great rhythm to it as well. I also like the title, even though it looks like you were kind of just throwing it out there. Sometimes the casual "throwing it out there" vibe can be great. Terrific work all around.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Something magical and wonderful about your writes that touches and changes people...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Aristede Craig Jr
Aristede Craig Jr

new orleans, LA



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