Which did they go?

Which did they go?

A Poem by Aristede Craig Jr

everything is okay 
when it goes her 
everthing is okay 
when it goes his way
but my way and your way 
goes 
so 
far away...
see distance is not outer space ..
distance is but obstacles
in our way..
and things don't always go our way
but its okay.
yes its okay
Love its okay......

© 2015 Aristede Craig Jr


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This has a calming feeling to it. We need to chill out and be patient when things are not going our way. Think clearly and then act. An excellent write...:)..................

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the outer space and obstacles lines. Love is about compromise because we have to live with real people, not our ideals.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

True love can overcome many obstacles, I won't say all for life isn't fair and fate has a knack of piling on the pressures...lovely, insightful piece xo

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Aristede Craig Jr
Aristede Craig Jr

new orleans, LA



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A lover striving to be lovely more..

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