Intro to Rambling Poetry into to Me

If yall didnt know now yall should,

the stand of a poet a rambling poet

trying not to stand tall

because he is afraid of the fal

but i yall didnt know yall should

i go from here and appear

infront of you

trying to figure out my next move never taking a glimpse

as if your a ghost silently whispering hello, whats up , hi,

and i turn quick to return to seeing you hi

 

My name is Aristede Craig Jr... this beast that lives in me Edet Sira

he writes fire that leaves marks thats deeper than the attempt to scratch out permanant ink

actually its permant once you begin to sink,like stick your teeth and bite this before it bite you, never try to when a fight when your still battling you.... Edet Sira

Reviews

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I really enjoyed this, Love the title.
I enjoyed reading this write.

[Aristede Craig Jr]

it wasnt really a poem but thinks its kinda a intro to me alil bit but not to much i just wanted to put something on lol

[TJ]

All in all this is an OK poem. There are a few spelling errors that need addressed and I'm not quite sure of the rhyming format here; at some points it seems like it is supposed to be a rhyming poem and at other points it doesn't. I liked your line "Trying not to stand tall because he is afraid of the fal (sic)". It makes nice imagery of someone wanting success but fearing it at the same time. Aside from that I'm not sensing any message from this poem or any overarching theme. I'm also not sure if the last paragraph is part of the poem or an aside since it seems to be formatted differently.