Contest?

Contest?

A Poem by Aristede Craig Jr

you cant put me in a contest i would never win,

even if some one said i wouldnt

because i cant win,

i can write pages that slash at the edge your mind making you

want to jump, commit succide

i can make you cry , not because your sad but because you witnessed this infront your eyes

the beauty of poetry braking down infront me comes together

as im calling

and the words create topics that were never there ,

and my hair is a mess

but i keep trying to finish this process

the poetry that can take over your pen write no's were you thought you wrote yes

but you tried your best

this could never be contained in a contest unless you let me ramble on through after reciting the written part of the poem

until your not enjoying

until your listening to the extra extra read all about it

as i shout it in your ear

so the ear drums beat the same fast pace of your heart

contest hmmm should i take part? sure why not .... (lol)

© 2011 Aristede Craig Jr


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Aristede Craig Jr
ummm hmmm idk

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LOL This is awesome love! Contests - a really cool thinking piece! Loved this!
xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lol, have you been surfing aroud on here through different contests made by users? Nothing likable? I can understand partly, when you do settle yourself down to enter one you find appealing you feel restricted and that isn't okay always. Your writing no matter what kind is yours to be accepted.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Aristede Craig Jr
Aristede Craig Jr

new orleans, LA



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