Meditation

Meditation

A Poem by Aristede Craig Jr

meditation ,relax

chill you will be over the..

hill

you will float levitate just ....

wait ; meditate

its coming to the point when you try to breathe just to breathe

instead of yelling look everyone im breathing

easing out the crazyness the things that got me tripping as im flipping out of my mind

relax relax ...

chill out change that pouted mouth to a blank expression just to get back to ...

the happiness

stumble to correct your feet at the last moment

 sometimes when your falling you must enjoy it...

shhh quiet this is meditation

ridicolus as i spaz out the thoughts to think nothing of what i thought

soon to fill again soon to feel again soon to knock out my wind

with the many blows from life,

as it beats me up im getting stepped on

cant get up

panic panic panic pan... nic

fanning sweating,relax release

sheesh this is ... this is meditation

is this what im missing trying to connect by dissconnecting my mind

is uncontainable i cant manage the hating so its lost as im loving

the meditation but my thoughts unplug only make them come harder piling up

just to feeel to weight of the thoughts crushing me

then i write poetry , doing the opposite breathe

easy easy why are you hesitating

to relax this here, poetry building moutain thoughts and giving them somewhere to erupt and form new construction , relief of the aching ....

this is my meditation

 Edet Sira

© 2011 Aristede Craig Jr


Author's Note

Aristede Craig Jr
write until it feels right and wrong then carry on writing ..... Edet Sira

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Great idea behind this poem...Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bravo Friend! Loved the message here :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To transcend in such unique manner is to know life through art....blissfully done love, a favourite!
xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Aristede Craig Jr
Aristede Craig Jr

new orleans, LA



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