The Transformation Dreams to Reality

The Transformation Dreams to Reality

A Poem by Aristede Craig Jr
"

possibly it could be true but what are you going to do rule or be ruled live or be lived use you for you before they do! "Aristede/Edet Sira love like no other

"

I am lost sometimes, but i can find

i can find myself. listen missing

getting to the point

to the bending joint sinking in the lost debths

the deep feet underneath me

im ready to be losing

 so that i can start winning

im believing im not living

but if you ask me if im dying i might agree

i might be losing me

but i can find, i can find myself. selfish kisses while mother Earth breathes in me

a animal fear of God, but loving Him to life

as this heart beat decrease i feel the stirring sight ;

 dreams becoming reality, the sleep waking life 

and the worshippers of reality

getting angry,

strangely we smile and love, even when were dying we love

because , in my head the world is a busy bee who never holds its buzz, because its time

for me to find my life so i can die right so i can live right

so one or two or a group can see whats right in front of them

stem grow , into that tree of life so

so so

so

 

strong

And to not just carry on the pain of reality

but carry your dreams when your eye or open

to focus to lose focus  tofocus to lose focus

to finish dying to live

to give yourself the truth

or attempt to find it

keep on dreaming......... 

© 2011 Aristede Craig Jr


Author's Note

Aristede Craig Jr
love like no other unique strong through God

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

What I love about that way you structure this piece, is how you employ that flow of consciousness into your writing. It adds honest sincerity to the piece, like we're a chosen few getting to look into some of the most intimate thoughts and uncertainties of your poem’s speaker. It's truly a beautiful work and honestly a stance of thought that I always thought more poets should take. Poetry isn't always about going off into the woods like the romantics, and having some sort of life revelation, poetry, when employed to do so can really open people up to shared feeling about life, death, and death in life.

I love the duality you create in this piece between dreams and reality, expectation for life and what we all fear might come to pass... nothing.


strangely we smile and love, even when were dying we love

because , in my head the world is a busy bee who never holds its buzz, because its time

for me to find my life so i can die right so i can live right

so one or two or a group can see whats right in front of them

stem grow , into that tree of life so


I think these lines are just brilliant! I'm going to be rolling them around in my head all day.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

You've gotta have a dream

Posted 6 Years Ago


"sinking in the lost debths ( depths )typo

the deep feet underneath me

im ready to be losing

so that i can start winning

im believing im not living

but if you ask me if im dying i might agree

i might be losing me

but i can find, i can find myself."

A good reflective poem with power and strength ...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


wonderful write..well penned

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You think with your words openly. You let us into your mind for a brief moment, which is one of the reasons your uniqueness will find itself widely known for its greatness one of these precious days. =)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What I love about that way you structure this piece, is how you employ that flow of consciousness into your writing. It adds honest sincerity to the piece, like we're a chosen few getting to look into some of the most intimate thoughts and uncertainties of your poem’s speaker. It's truly a beautiful work and honestly a stance of thought that I always thought more poets should take. Poetry isn't always about going off into the woods like the romantics, and having some sort of life revelation, poetry, when employed to do so can really open people up to shared feeling about life, death, and death in life.

I love the duality you create in this piece between dreams and reality, expectation for life and what we all fear might come to pass... nothing.


strangely we smile and love, even when were dying we love

because , in my head the world is a busy bee who never holds its buzz, because its time

for me to find my life so i can die right so i can live right

so one or two or a group can see whats right in front of them

stem grow , into that tree of life so


I think these lines are just brilliant! I'm going to be rolling them around in my head all day.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poetry sings to me love! Always a blessing to read your work and dance in its light! xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

724 Views
7 Reviews
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on September 12, 2011
Last Updated on September 12, 2011

Author

Aristede Craig Jr
Aristede Craig Jr

new orleans, LA



About
A lover striving to be lovely more..

Writing