Flirting=Being Friendly

Flirting=Being Friendly

A Poem by Aristede Craig Jr

She likes the way i tango

but she is just servicing my table,

with this drink that is absent of alcohol

and full of oh Hiiiiiiii Yallllllllllllllll

can ihave fun? do i have to ask your permission,

where are you getting that ,

flirting,okay you say but slave say say im not one so i wont obey

but i love you i love you anyway,

but can i dance with my voice to another women

ok maybe the first moment

i took in beauty but thats all i was doing ,

admiring her hair, a bit unfair , you wanted attention,

i gave you mine but why cant i have fun,

for once or twice or how many times that night,

i danced in the room sitting down listening to everyone

while hearing myself,

where did that come from its me silly me

if it was flirting,then forgive me,

if its because i asked her name forgive me,

because years ago i would be the quiet little dude in the corner

as they ask for my order, never hearing myself being present

but you know what i was present but the love for me from you was absent,

or did you not notice, that if i dont start speaking i wont be heard,

but if you didnt listen you must have forgotten these words

I fell in "Love With You"

and i thought i deserved








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By Aristede Craig Jr.



© 2011 Aristede Craig Jr

Author's Note

Aristede Craig Jr
Flirting really so flirting must go hand and hand with be friendly to let people know hey your friendly okkkkk check it out love allll is all

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Woot! And that is a reeling feeling lol
Hon, this is on fire, a superb pace to the poem and cleverly written, I love it! xoxo

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A nice flirty flowing write. The tone sets the atmosphere nicely. Good one!

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on October 18, 2011
Last Updated on October 18, 2011


Aristede Craig Jr
Aristede Craig Jr

new orleans, LA

A lover striving to be lovely more..