Lost Finding Love

Lost Finding Love

A Poem by Aristede Craig Jr
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when your lost in love its truly beautiful, if its not beautiful ask yourself what is truly love.... Edet Sira tis love is all

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lost in you,

lost in me,
thats all i want to be,
lost is the best way to find something,
to fall in love you must atleast be standing,
to feel alive,you must be breathing,
for it to be easy you must attack when its a small problem,
but then again easy aint always as small,
 lost in you
lost in me
free falling,
in love,
tree falling,
in love,
leaves fall but not like this but,
how i float thats how love carries me
parachute,
love me,
lovely,
inside me im finding love for this ,
its,
footprints in the sand ,
you leave a impression ,
and then they dissappear on the beach,
but not my memory,
they are lost sometimes but refresh me,
cool breeze,
never seize,
unless it is the day with me
free falling
in love
lost in you
lost in me
loving boldly
loving strongly
because im falling freely,
searching through  the love; lost in it
kiss this; every breath i take is l o v e;
lost in you,
lost in me
thats where i land forever to be.......Edet Sira RamblePoet

© 2012 Aristede Craig Jr


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"free falling,
in love,
tree falling,
in love,
leaves fall but not like this but,
how i float thats how love carries me
parachute,
love me,"
A very nice poem . Those are my favorite lines...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Phrasing the thoughts of kisses on paper. On white. To just...freely...love.
"lost in you
lost in me
loving boldly
loving strongly"

Posted 7 Years Ago


Good piece of writing, like the use of short phrases, and the repeats that work like the refrain of a song, lots to enjoy here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Aristede Craig Jr
Aristede Craig Jr

new orleans, LA



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