God's Love

God's Love

A Story by Aristede Craig Jr

roses pedal around us on bikes sorrounding us cupid has a clear shot at us . cupid shoots. ah love .... we both speak i love you then bathe in the silence of that occurence the endurance of the roses increased but then they stop and we breached
God blocked the arrow and said i shall take it from here and he put her hand in mine ,
and said do something divine you lovely human, love her with my Love i Grant You My Love and i took her hand and said thank you God i Love You , and Through , you I Will love her...... whisperstis love is all , dont they all get it; and He left us to it vanish ..... ruin building just look ruined but build it with love and it will look beautiful together the perfect ingredient , the smell sweet , making everything uncomparable as if they all where stenches, then i mention He never leaves in this Love because He is this Love Edet Sira RamblePoet

© 2012 Aristede Craig Jr

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I think you do great jobs in the free verse aspects...A splendid poem...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago

I like the free form quality to this :) Really well versed love, a pleasure to read :) xoxo

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on May 24, 2012
Last Updated on May 24, 2012


Aristede Craig Jr
Aristede Craig Jr

new orleans, LA

A lover striving to be lovely more..