Tears Of Life

Tears Of Life

A Poem by Hotaru Miyuki

The rain falls,
raindrops are like tears,
it's like the sky is crying,
for either a loss, or event.
 
Drops fall on me,
as I walk through ,
why are tears coming from my eyes
as I walk through green and grey.
 
Raindrops are cold,
tears are warm,
I never really got that
but it numbs my mind.
 
I feel neglect,
my friends treat me like nothing,
I wonder if I am important,
or just an extra to them.
 
Do I have a purpose,
I don't know,
no one cares...
I only wish for love.
 
Hatred is around me,
glares stare deep in me,
my tears crash around me,
why doesn't no one want me?
 
Why do I act this way?
Will I ever have a future?
I walk through the dark clouds,
around tears of life.

© 2009 Hotaru Miyuki


Author's Note

Hotaru Miyuki
based on real events after an incident with my friends............

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Loved this

So well written and if your wondering, I'm going on a reviewing spree lol

Posted 15 Years Ago


wow, amazing how things come out when things get to u that's how i am..very good

Posted 15 Years Ago


Painfully good, I feel your pain Lauren. That's what a writer is suppose to do, make people feel what they feel. Painfully good :]

Posted 15 Years Ago


wow. i really loved this poem. i could tell that you were feeling pain just by reading the words. wonderful use of words. Great job :]

Posted 15 Years Ago


Hon. I have went through this also! I feel like this everyday and you did so great getting your emotions in a poem! Everything will get better, everything happens for a reason!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 18, 2009

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Hotaru Miyuki
Hotaru Miyuki

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