A Chapter by Hotaru Miyuki

   I didn't know what was happening. Against my own will, I kept swinging and throwing the cleaver around. There was something inside me, something I was trying to control but couldn't. The demon inside me controlled my arms, legs, body, even whatever I said out loud was controlled. My mind felt blank like I was in a trance. It felt like I didn't know where I was, what I'm even doing, or even know who I am. I felt no control over anything.

   Finally I felt my arms stop swinging. At that moment, I felt like I came back the real world or I just woke up from a long nap. I stared down to see what I have just done. On the ground, a boy with curly brown hair laid there. He was wearing a white shirt and jeans...covered from head to toe of dark red fluid.

   I fell to the ground on my knees and continued to stare at the blood stained boy who I was sure isn't alive. Then that feeling came back again, the demon took over once more inside me. I watched through my own eyes, to see what may happen next.

   The demon spoke through my mouth and with my voice. "I" whispered softly, "There more trouble is there? You are free from this world and your body thanks to me...."

     Once again, I have control again as the demon inside me went back into it's small space in the back of my mind. I got up swiftly, still in a trance, and walked away from the corpse slowly. Still holding the blood stained cleaver in my hand, I felt a warm wetness on my face and hands. I took my hand and wiped off some of the boy's blood off my face. I felt a grin coming from my mouth and I smiled. I believe my work here was done.

    I walked away, feeling satisfied of what I just done to my younger brother back there.

© 2010 Hotaru Miyuki

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Hotaru Miyuki
haha scary isnt it. review plz and tell everyone about my story! ^_^

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Sounds really good! Got me sucked in straight away. Good work Moonraiser :P

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Hotaru Miyuki
Hotaru Miyuki

Stratford, NJ

Hi. My name's Lauren but I like the name Hotaru. Hotaru means Firefly in japanese if you want to know. I love anime and manga. Here's a list of some I like... Naruto Bleach Inuyasha Fruits Baske.. more..

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