The Real HER

Love it or Hate it...

I want Her

The Real Her

I want the best of Her

Even the worst of Her

I'll give everything and more to Her

When I see the world, I see Her

When I'm happy I only think of Her

If I need inspiration I think of Her

If I need someone to call it'll be Her

I want to go deep inside of Her

I want to be in the soul of Her

I'll spend eternity & more with Her

Forever after just me and Her

Glad I found Her,

THE REAL HER

Author's Note

I expanded this one by like three extra bars...

Reviews

[BlackRose]

Fab piece. What can I say. One part I might change is, 'I hope I'm in the soul of Her.' I would say instead, the way it's said seems out of place with the rest, but maybe something as, 'I long to be deep in the soul of her. The rest is great! :o)

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[Missiannelli]

You really want her completely. Lovely :)

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you! Glad you reviewed this one!

[Girl With A Pen]

Aww this poem is beautiful! This is true love. Wanting to be with someone no matter if it is a good day or a bad and still loving then just for who they are.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for reviewing!

[Ranger Kessel]

I like it. I want to eclipse the soul of her maybe... Just thinking out loud. good poem. enjoyed it.:)

[Jack Kennedy]

Wow that easily could be a line in there somewhere! Thanks for reviewing

[Pryde Foltz]

Deeply romantic piece. You are very lucky to have found someone who you feel this way about and who feels the same about you.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for the review and glad you liked this poem as much as you did!

[michele vera]

This is a great Poem! It sounds like You are truly in love. I enjoyed this Poem very nuch. nice work!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

This piece is soo sweet, I loved reading it. She's very lucky to have you.

Kaze~ :-)

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for the review! :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome.

[Brook]

Wonderful piece. I love the rhythm, and your what you're saying. It's very beautiful.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it

[Luna Zerimar]

You're so talented.

I loved this. Again, I can relate.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you! I'm glad your enjoying my works. I'm hoping it leaves a lasting impact on you!

[Laura Harrison]

This is so cute and beautiful :)

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you!

[Susie]

Whoever she is, she is lucky to have such a well-articulating admirer.
Every word in this draws the reader in. Warm-fluffy feelings haha! Thanks for inviting me to read!

[Jack Kennedy]

You're welcome and thank you for reviewing! :)

[Susie]

Anytime, invite me to read any of your work. I enjoy it. It's quite inspirational when I read quality pieces.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you and I will! It will take me a bit to review chapter 11 because I'm going to start from the beginning! :)

[Susie]

Oh Christ! Please bear in mind a friend of mine is editing it so I know it is flawed. I feel embarrassed after reading your brilliant poem!! Haha