Purity

Purity

A Poem by EdwardBlue

Tell me again what I'm trying to remember ?
Before my knowing, knew .
Remember that ? 
Please Run it back , one more time if you will
This time I promise to savor .
It was the glory of being . 
To be.
Purity of joyous behavior

© 2011 EdwardBlue


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I think of a baby taking a bath; splashing around, laughing, when I take this in. My innocence stolen at such a young age; it is hard to recall this kind of pure ecstasy. But it lives in my dreams. Beautiful offering, Edward.
masqued_muse^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is pure. As ~Purity is. As I wrote about the subject too... but in a diffrent state of ~ Time. Lovely work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wonderful words.
Truly heart touching. Yes, Joy is most heartening in childhood years... it doesn't need any reason.
Great write and very true one.
Good job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think of a baby taking a bath; splashing around, laughing, when I take this in. My innocence stolen at such a young age; it is hard to recall this kind of pure ecstasy. But it lives in my dreams. Beautiful offering, Edward.
masqued_muse^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is balance here.. the chaos of thought then the purity of joyous behavior... x

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

to capture that innocense ..is not only impossible the older we get.. but more than difficult to even imagine..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is wonderful. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 21, 2011
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EdwardBlue
EdwardBlue

Boulder, CO



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