gentle pain

you would

You wanted to go so

far away

after leavving me

we did talk for hours

gentle remorse

our haunts are now

just untouched

no more scratching

no more painless biting

to light me up

your heart is my haven

when I was jealous

I was gentle 

when I was possessive

I was not brittle

when I was your soldier

I was responsible

nothing is like how you love me

nothing is like how  you love me

you said you are 

hear to stay I'm smiling

I'm trying to stop the tears

I do look weird

I'm not deranged

yet you still love me

i hate myself when i'm crying

 I cry all alone   (hurts like heaven)

i love myself for you

i would never nearly die again

I just want to be cradled

I'm only a bundle of pain

like the air and some life

light to your petals

Ii would neever nearlt die gain

I love myself for you

Author's Note

its sloe

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The twisted emotion of love written well in the poetry.
"i hate myself when i'm crying
I cry all alone (hurts like heaven)
i love myself for you
i would never nearly die again"
Love lead us crazy places and things we would do for love. The above realistic and true. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Effector Prime]

u think so? s s s s sS i g hhhhhh

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You capture the essence of pain when parting from a loved one under such circumstances. You do need to sort out the spelling and typos though.

[DIVYA]

There's a lesson I've learnt my dear friend. One must give a lot but not give oneself away completely in love. So that when they go you can reach within and find that piece of you to begin to reconstruct. Next time, try a bit of painful biting!
Superbly written!

[Effector Prime]

Aye true. Lesson learnt haha

[DIVYA]

Lol. I learnt mine too dear friend and t'was a great learning :)

[RSB]

Can you expound upon "hurts like heaven"? Interesting concept

[Effector Prime]

pain and precise :(