Feeling helpless

Menopause or depression

Why bother explaining how you feel
Its very alienating
Differences are glaring
What causes craziness
Wishing for some peace
Quiet the mind
Meditate
Yoga
Stop

Reviews

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True, why bother? If it's depression, you are weak. Menopause " Oh no, the change!" Love how you expressed alienation. There times all the best you can do is to quiet the mind like you so well put it in at the end. Still love the why bother the best. N.

[EileenMarie]

Silence is my answer when I don't know what else to do. Learning to be a survivor is ongoing. Thanks again!!

[Brian]

I am left wondering with intrigue.

And we all stop. I wonder where you do when the world halts.. in your core.

Lovely.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you! When I stop I switch direction .. Positive direction! Hoping to write in a more positive light soon :) thanks for your review means a lot!!

[Brian]

So does that mean life for you has taken a turn for the brighter days and ways?

I do so hope that is the case. You deserve it! :)

[Chris]

Catch a breath,
feel the sun
taste the air...
dance in the rain
glisten in the firelight
walk beneath the stars...
Remember you're a woman
...and worth it.

Chris

[EileenMarie]

The light is coming through the darkness! Thanks for reading and your review!!

[wordman]

a familiar place for many,hope you move on soon

[EileenMarie]

Thank you! I appreciate your review!

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Tom]

Ah indeed a little chill out, me time....we all need that and well conveyed to that effect !

[EileenMarie]

Thank you for your review!!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Exactly. You find what your looking for by all of the above. I'm so glad you didn't rhyme everything.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you!! The style is a Nonnet, rhyming not necessary :)

[A. Amos]

I truly enjoyed the feel of your poem, there are times we need to quiet the mind...very well written my friend.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you for the review!

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear

[Pryde Foltz]

What causes craziness
Wishing for some peace
Quiet the mind
Meditate
Yoga
Stop

Your thoughts make you suffer; your actions make you crazy. Loved the message of this one.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you!!

[Blogger]

Well, you dont sound crazy. Just a little adventurous?

[EileenMarie]

I need to be more adventurous! Especially out of my head. I do however write my best when I feel my worst. Thanks!

[Blogger]

You are very welcome!

[John Preston]

Well I'd go to sleep
just think what was said.

[EileenMarie]

I wish I could sleep it away I really do.
Thanks for commenting!!

[John Preston]

Can you talk to someone about this ?