Feeling helpless

Feeling helpless

A Poem by EileenMarie
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Menopause or depression

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Why bother explaining how you feel
Its very alienating
Differences are glaring
What causes craziness
Wishing for some peace
Quiet the mind
Meditate
Yoga
Stop

© 2014 EileenMarie


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True, why bother? If it's depression, you are weak. Menopause " Oh no, the change!" Love how you expressed alienation. There times all the best you can do is to quiet the mind like you so well put it in at the end. Still love the why bother the best. N.

Posted 4 Years Ago


EileenMarie

4 Years Ago

Silence is my answer when I don't know what else to do. Learning to be a survivor is ongoing. Thanks.. read more
I am left wondering with intrigue.

And we all stop. I wonder where you do when the world halts.. in your core.

Lovely.

Posted 6 Years Ago


EileenMarie

6 Years Ago

Thank you! When I stop I switch direction .. Positive direction! Hoping to write in a more positive .. read more
Brian

6 Years Ago

So does that mean life for you has taken a turn for the brighter days and ways?

I do .. read more
Catch a breath,
feel the sun
taste the air...
dance in the rain
glisten in the firelight
walk beneath the stars...
Remember you're a woman
...and worth it.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


EileenMarie

6 Years Ago

The light is coming through the darkness! Thanks for reading and your review!!
a familiar place for many,hope you move on soon

Posted 6 Years Ago


EileenMarie

6 Years Ago

Thank you! I appreciate your review!
 wordman

6 Years Ago

my pleasure
Ah indeed a little chill out, me time....we all need that and well conveyed to that effect !

Posted 6 Years Ago


EileenMarie

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your review!!
Exactly. You find what your looking for by all of the above. I'm so glad you didn't rhyme everything.

Posted 6 Years Ago


EileenMarie

6 Years Ago

Thank you!! The style is a Nonnet, rhyming not necessary :)
I truly enjoyed the feel of your poem, there are times we need to quiet the mind...very well written my friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


EileenMarie

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the review!
A. Amos

6 Years Ago

You're most welcome my dear
What causes craziness
Wishing for some peace
Quiet the mind
Meditate
Yoga
Stop

Your thoughts make you suffer; your actions make you crazy. Loved the message of this one.

Posted 6 Years Ago


EileenMarie

6 Years Ago

Thank you!!
Well, you dont sound crazy. Just a little adventurous?

Posted 6 Years Ago


EileenMarie

6 Years Ago

I need to be more adventurous! Especially out of my head. I do however write my best when I feel m.. read more
Blogger

6 Years Ago

You are very welcome!
Well I'd go to sleep
just think what was said.

Posted 6 Years Ago


EileenMarie

6 Years Ago

I wish I could sleep it away I really do.
Thanks for commenting!!
John Preston

6 Years Ago

Can you talk to someone about this ?

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