At first

our first meeting

As I caught my breath, I stepped out of the creepy basement

The frigid wind behind me chilled my warm body

Your smiling blue eyes oh so brilliant

As I caught my breath, I stepped out of the creepy basement

I am shivering as my knees are collapsing in an instant

You neglect to notice my steps guiding briskly

As I caught my breath, I stepped out of the creepy basement

The frigid wind behind me chilled my warm body

 

 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, sometimes it is like that, isn't it.
We get some feeling that we can't put our finger on, and then the hair on the back of our neck rises---we wonder of the moment---look behind us, and it is gone...a glance, a thought---a hope.
that walking from that basement, we can find it again and it will be warm.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you! You’re very insightful.

[Levi Levin]

This things indeed happen to us, and so charming the moments are. Unforgettable precious memories. Great work!

[lessa (kenzie)]

So VERY awesome, I like this write a lot.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you!

[Helena]

A very well written poem. Loved how you used the 10 words! Thank you for submitting this to my contests.

Helena

[EileenMarie]

Thank you! I write my best when I’m a little sad lol

[Helena]

So do I, strangely EileenMarie! :)

Kind regards,
Helena