Smile

Smile when you don't know what else to do

Smile

She smiles because she has to

She smiles to hide the pain

She smiles to pretend

She smiles to make others feel better

She smiles to agree

She smiles because she doesn’t know what else to do

Frown

She frowns because she has to

She frowns to hide the joy

She frowns to fit in

She frowns to make others feel better

She frowns to agree

She frowns because she doesn’t know what else to do.

Smile……… Frown………… Smile

She has a beautiful smile

She feels worthy when she smiles

She feels typical when she smiles

She feels elated when she smiles

She feels magnetic when she smiles

She feels! She feels when she smiles

She feels………….

Reviews

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Excellent poem about smiling and feelings. I liked this beautiful poem, thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.
100/100

[EileenMarie]

Again thanks for all your reviews!

[Dean Kuch®]

I really liked how you used those last two stanzas in this to make such a powerful statement and tie everything together in a nice ( and very neat! ) little package.
Thanks for turning my frown upside down!

[EileenMarie]

wow thank you! I really love this one myself because I wrote it about me and taking a negative and turning it into a positive!

[Dean Kuch®]

You are vey welcome! I'm still smiling... :)

[afra]

awwww this poem brought a smile on my face ...good job

[EileenMarie]

Oh thank you :) glad you smiled!

[afra]

=)

[koty bell]

very nice poem loved it

[EileenMarie]

Thanks! :)

[Debbie_Philly]

Ohhhh I really like this... I understand very well.. I can relate... and to relate to a piece is what we strive for in writing and reading... powerful !!

[EileenMarie]

Thank you....... I enjoy your work too :)

[Kyle]

Well done! I think you should make the font larger though since some of us have to really struggle to see the text here....lol

[EileenMarie]

I fixed it :) thanks for mentioning it!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the use of repetition to make your point in the poem. Sometime we show a fake face to allow the world not to know our sadness. The flow of thoughts gave reason and purpose for the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[EileenMarie]

Thanks for reading!

[Sujash I. Purna]

Unique presentation...nice work!

[EileenMarie]

Thank you!

[Falling Leaf.]

I love the raw confusion and passion. Unique structure. I fancy it!
~The Wilted Rose

[EileenMarie]

Yes I truly do smile when I am confused it is the simplest solution!

[Dr. Wood ?]

very uplifting piece. made me smile

[EileenMarie]

Thanks again!