Hello Darkness My Old Friend

Hello Darkness My Old Friend

A Poem by Eiri

Hello darkness my old friend

I've been looking for you

Since we haven't seen each other in a while

 

Hello darkness my old friend

We used to wait for each other from time to time

And spend time together in darkness

 

Hello darkness my old friend

I've been meanig to see you and now

I'm excited that we'll be meeting soon

 

Hello darkness my old friend

I'm sorry I've made you wait

But now we'll be together at last

Hello darkness my old friend

© 2008 Eiri


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I love the irony. I suppose that you're saying that your life has been great for quite awhile now, but good doesn't last for long. Nothing's perfect. You're slipping back into old times, and nothing's going to so great anymore.

Posted 10 Years Ago


There are some grammar problams, and spelling.
But, otherwise. The idea for this poem was really good.

Awsome job. Great write.
Keep writing.

XxStaySweet,
Rina

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on October 9, 2008
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Eiri
Eiri

underyourbed, FL



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Well I like to read book and manga, write, watch tv and anime, horror movies from Japan, I'm very easy to get along with and I can be slightly random at times. I live in the Sunshine state of Florida... more..

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