A Poem by Eiri

Its the continuation of Oblivion


Fallin and spinning in oblivion

She saw his familiar light

But didn't know him


He saw her in the mist of chaos

And felt his light dim further

As he threw himself into oblivion


She grew worried when his light dimmed

And fought against the darkness

To tell him to go back


He fought thru the darkness that held her

While oblivion threatened to take him

He saw her fighting thru the darkness and renewed his fight


She didnt want him to become lost in oblivion

He wanted to bring her back to the light

They met and held each other in a lovers embrace


His light grew strong as he held her

The darkness withdrew from them

But kept its hold on her, and lost her again


He called out to her, using all his strenght

He then thought he'd never see her again

But a small glimmer of light told him he would



© 2008 Eiri

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I wanst planning on continuing on Oblivion but I re-read it and decided to write more, I'll probably write a third and final part to it. Tell me what you think.

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