Tattered

Tattered

A Poem by Final-Karma
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Teaching those who find another way.

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The Great Mother devours her children

She encompasses their souls

Giving them a place to call home


The Lost Son brings death to light

He humbles the weak

Showing them the truth of tomorrow


Ashes

© 2018 Final-Karma


Author's Note

Final-Karma
Just a short thought.

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An amazing piece! Like the days we live, everything is apart of the great cycle of life. We all go through surges of emotions, and we even change forms throughout its course. Yet, in the end its all connected in one way or another. Thanks for writing this wonderful poem. keep writing and growing. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your great review! You always interpret my work so well. I am glad you are sti.. read more



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Deep! Sincere and very philosophical. I like this piece. Splendid writing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your insight!
Like a lost lamb, returned to the herd! Religiouly uplifting, powerful and very dramatic.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I always enjoy reading your reviews.
I really like that poem. I feel like you really are emotional about something in the poem a little but that is my opinion.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

3 Years Ago

I was emotional at the time. I try to use my work to get things out of my head. Thank you for taking.. read more
harmonyrose

3 Years Ago

your welcome
very interesting thought. Love it

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
An amazing piece! Like the days we live, everything is apart of the great cycle of life. We all go through surges of emotions, and we even change forms throughout its course. Yet, in the end its all connected in one way or another. Thanks for writing this wonderful poem. keep writing and growing. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your great review! You always interpret my work so well. I am glad you are sti.. read more
I really like this! It gives me kind of ominous vibes but also the feeling that some really powerful forces are in play, and that one should feel reverence towards them.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much! You have felt the exact feeling that I wanted this piece to display.
Fanicia E.

3 Years Ago

You're welcome! It was a pleasure to read
What a beautiful poem. I read it about four times to interpret the message for myself and it was extremely well-written. Bravo.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind words to my work.
What I read in this poem is an original, artistic blending of Mother Nature, God, and the Devil. Perhaps a new trinity (not holy or unholy, just truth in nature). You certainly convey how we're merely specks of matter on earth, subject to the gifts and whims of nature. Perhaps off, but that's my take on this one.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

3 Years Ago

I love your interpretation because it is precisely my thoughts. This was quickly written after havin.. read more

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Added on February 21, 2018
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Tags: love, poetry, time, death

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Hello, I am Final-Karma. I dabble in the known and unknown. Please read my work and let your minds be expanded. Feel free to message me, I am always excited to speak to new people from all walks of li.. more..

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