Unyielding

Unyielding

A Poem by Final-Karma
"

Strength in weakness.

"
High within the clouds 
You stood above us
Marching your sky legions to war
The mellow beat of conquest

You shouted, "Never reign! Never reign!"
"Just pour"

Steady advance 
Never push the line
Natural temptation

Victory....

But again you shout,
"Never reign! Never reign!"
"Just pour"

So we humbled ourselves

But...

Your shouts were never heard...

Not until you fell from the sky
Cut down by flames and rocks
Replaced by a new Lord

He yelled, "Push, kill, die"
We did
Until it dawned on us

What our old Lord truly said 

Never reign, never reign
Because to reign,

Is to be forgotten.......

© 2018 Final-Karma


Author's Note

Final-Karma
Continuing: This will be a series of small thoughts and expressions from my life.

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I like these small series of thoughts and expressions. It's as if we get to see small facets of your mind. It's as you're telling pieces of stories. With this one, it reminds me of the 1800-1900's where a nation is as strong as their king. Well, when it reigns it pours. There is a strong sense of battle in here that screams perseverance. In life, we all have struggles that we have to get through. Push on. I like this. Great read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! These are definitely pieces of my mind. Thoughts and random illusions from differ.. read more



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This was so beautiful ! And I truly felt each word.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Powerful, dramatic and dramatic just is life.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like these small series of thoughts and expressions. It's as if we get to see small facets of your mind. It's as you're telling pieces of stories. With this one, it reminds me of the 1800-1900's where a nation is as strong as their king. Well, when it reigns it pours. There is a strong sense of battle in here that screams perseverance. In life, we all have struggles that we have to get through. Push on. I like this. Great read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! These are definitely pieces of my mind. Thoughts and random illusions from differ.. read more

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Hello, I am Final-Karma. I dabble in the known and unknown. Please read my work and let your minds be expanded. Feel free to message me, I am always excited to speak to new people from all walks of li.. more..

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