Run.

Run.

A Poem by Eldee
"

We will continue on...

"

Run.
Foot over foot,
Heel beyond toe.
Over and over and over we go.
The shadows, they grasp
They tickle with glee
but somewhere
someone
is calling my name.
So I keep on going.

© 2009 Eldee


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Okay, this is my new favorite from you! When we run from something, most times what we're running from (what I'm presuming the shadows are) catch up with us and hit us ten times harder. Being able to run from something and escape the backlash is an amazing feeling. When we let go. This was so awesome, I'm putting it in my favorites. I think it's so clever and really well written. It describes what lots of people go through, making it relatable, which the best works of writing are. Super fantastic job on this, and sorry if I rambled too long.

-Stephanie

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Like a soft breeze with voices within ~ to call you... lovely!

Posted 12 Years Ago


An excellent piece of short poetic imagery, a fun read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


great work

Posted 13 Years Ago


beautiful short poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


beautiful short poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this! Great flow, beautifully written. This piece is wonder, short and sweet and it has a nice feeling about it. Great work!

-Howl

Posted 14 Years Ago


After reading this poem three times, I had several ideas. It is a great poem that opens doors. I think it is about faith, relationships, pursuit of goals, motivation, self assurance and responsibility or even more. Good Work!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Okay, this is my new favorite from you! When we run from something, most times what we're running from (what I'm presuming the shadows are) catch up with us and hit us ten times harder. Being able to run from something and escape the backlash is an amazing feeling. When we let go. This was so awesome, I'm putting it in my favorites. I think it's so clever and really well written. It describes what lots of people go through, making it relatable, which the best works of writing are. Super fantastic job on this, and sorry if I rambled too long.

-Stephanie

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Eldee
Eldee

Southlake, TX



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NAME: Eldee, LD, Little Dragon, Eldearie BDAY: August 5th, 1992 Ah, what is there to say about little old me? I am 18 years of age, female, and an aspiring writer. Currently I am attending U.. more..

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