Falling

A tear,


Panic.

I'd painfully regret

All those heart-breaking songs.

A stab of guilt

As I froze in dilemma.

With tears or anxiety 
I started to fall

"Come back!”

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The strange type in the text apart, you capture in this short freeverse the moment of parallysis as one sees the person one loves leaving yet has no power to prevent it from happening.

[Eliana Thomas]

Thanks for the feedback! I hadn't noticed the typo so thanks for pointing that out.