Don't Drown Yourself

Don't Drown Yourself

A Poem by Elie Marie

Don't drown yourself
Listen
Reach out a hand
take a deep breath
Listen to the truth
Your heart is trying to tell you
Don't drown yourself.

Don't drown yourself
Happiness is to be had
It follows honesty
take a deep breath
listen to your heart
Reach out.
Don't drown yourself. 

Don't drown yourself. 

© 2015 Elie Marie


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This writing is short with huge encouragement to live and breath .Every single one who are going through this kinda phase will sure live after reading it
Thank you for saving many life and hearts . !
Gorgeous work !

Posted 8 Years Ago


Elie Marie

8 Years Ago

aww thanks :)
Is this like one of those feelings you get when your close to the edge and on top of a very tall building, or cliff and you get that urge to just jump?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Elie Marie

8 Years Ago

no, this is like one of those feelings you get when you're watching someone drown themselves.
Good advice and wisdom in the poem. We need to reach out for help. We can't do all things alone. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Elie Marie

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on January 17, 2015
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Tags: drown, drowning, reach out, happiness, truth

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Elie Marie
Elie Marie

London, United Kingdom



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I write to breathe. I write for me, not you. I write to stay alive. I've never gotten feedback or been part of anything like this, I'd love to hear what anyone other than me thinks of my words.. more..

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