I close my eyes and wish you here

I close my eyes and wish you here

A Poem by Elie Marie

I close my eyes
and wish you here
I close my eyes 
and hope you'll come over
crawl in under the blankets
touch me soflty
hold me sweetly
and give me kisses 
to slowly wake me up
I close my eyes
and wish you here
to turn over in bed
and bury myself into you
into your arms
your safe and loving arms. 
I close my eyes
and wish you here
to give me kisses 
and make me forget about the world
just for a bit. 
I close my eyes
and wish you here. 

© 2015 Elie Marie


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Nice and sweet, longing for love to be present, really enjoyed this piece, thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Elie Marie

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
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Gee
The beds to big without you,my world a lonely place,I long to hold you In my arms,and kiss your handsome face..........Is that what you're saying,really liked the poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Elie Marie

8 Years Ago

something like that :)
I understand this poem. Being apart leave us wishing for someone missed. I liked the want and the wish in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Elie Marie

8 Years Ago

thank you.
Yeah awesome poem and a brilliant way of using your words,and the emotions behind this poem are beautifully expressed keep writing =)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Elie Marie

8 Years Ago

thanks, that's really nice :)
This is gorgeous Elie Marie. A Saturday morning down-filled duvet of a poem.
Thanks for the RR
:))


Posted 8 Years Ago


Elie Marie

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much.
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I hope your wishes will come true Elie!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Elie Marie

8 Years Ago

aww thanks :)
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8 Years Ago

:) Welcome!
Very sad with a hint of small hope.. I like it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Elie Marie

8 Years Ago

sounds right. thanks :)
Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

You're welcome!!

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Added on January 30, 2015
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Elie Marie
Elie Marie

London, United Kingdom



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I write to breathe. I write for me, not you. I write to stay alive. I've never gotten feedback or been part of anything like this, I'd love to hear what anyone other than me thinks of my words.. more..

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