A Poem by Ellie Howard

I'm re-sumbiting this because i revised it into a write with much more passion.


A pattering on my neck,

A lip so calm and so content.

A quivering sigh,

Lamentingly bliss,

And so immaculate…

A shivering hand,

Mourning your touch

And a fervor silence demanding my clutch,

My eyes, my sight, bask in your blue light.

A night time glimpse,

Our skin so close,

A gentle blush to our lingering lips.

Like a tinted rose,

Our fingers grow together

A craving so far and everlasting,

Our passion embalmed forever.

Our chests breathe tenderly,

And our palms pressed leisurely.

I found delicate devotion in your hold,

And a glint under your brow,

An olive lush hue in your eye,

And an ardor hush in your cry.

© 2013 Ellie Howard

Author's Note

Ellie Howard
sometimes like poe and other poets i like to some what create new words

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It is really freaking amazing:) i give a 100/100
And i love the fact that new words can be created just through trying to a great poet.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Ellie Howard

9 Years Ago

thank you very much!

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Added on March 20, 2013
Last Updated on March 22, 2013
Tags: love poem, passion, love, quiver


Ellie Howard
Ellie Howard

San Antonio, TX

I'm 16 years old, and i'm in love with writing and literacy education. Writing is one of the only ways, besides my art, where i can express how i feel with confidence. Even though i'm not the religio.. more..