Blue dream

I wanna feel love, so I wrote something about this strange feeling:X. Love is more than you can see.

Blue dream

I allways thought I was mad

`Cause the rain never made me sad.

I watched the drops falling from above

And feeling them on my icy skin

Sitting on the ground

And looking curious around

For the perfect dove.

 

I felt strong

And wondered

If it was wrong

How I felt like.

But a voice in my head

(Like allways) said

Keep your dream.

 

And I smiled ahead

Looking for the peace

Watching for the blue

So, days later,

I found the true

Laying on the ground

Shaking his hand

So gorgeus perfect

His eyes deep

His face smooth.

 

I blinked hypnotized

I was inloved

A strange new feeling

Something new

But also very true.

I was afraid

Of ruining the moment

But he stood up

Hugged me softly

And kissed me so passionatly.

 

And then, right then,

I knew he was it.

The one I was looking for

Never found befor.

Never seen befor.

I gave a relieved scream

Because, of course,

I had found my Blue Dream.

Author's Note

I want to know what you think of it. I like to write about romance, love:X

Reviews

[Honeypot]

I thought this was good. I loved the first two stanzas especially and I thought it was a good idea.

[VolvoLife]

Fantastic.
I see you Really love to write poems (stories ) abou love. Like I allways said, Romance+Poetry=Universe.
And I like blue too.