Two Countries

Two Countries

A Poem by Eloha




I have two countries: stability and freedom

Or are both one? No sooner does the sun

Remind me why I was born

 

With long veils and holding a carnation

Bloodstained in this capitalism

This trembling corporate plutocracy

 

That to find freedom must I revert

To anarchy, become an activist

Light is a hindrance in this corrupt world

 

I have two countries: hope and cynicism

Or are both one? I feel a closeness

With the youth, people about to die

 

They remind me why I was born

When the new order is simple the old order

With a new form, I become troubled

 

The flowers crushed by the same patriarchy

There is so much control, that we don't even see. 

© 2013 Eloha


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Light and dark, soft and hard, hope and cynicism...I think that we cannot have one without the other when it comes to most things. As humans, I think one of our mortal veils is the ability (and sometimes disability) to have juxtaposing thoughts and even morals. Well written...deeply honest.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I am amazed. Such deep thoughts. It's astounding!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eloha

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I sometimes try to write deep thoughts.

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