Heartbreak Lullaby

I just wrote this and it's pretty good :)

You say you'll never leave me
You say you'll never go
But now that I'm alone 
I guess that wasn't so
A tearful stream of water
It flickers from my eyes
Love is never always
Love is just goodbye

Reviews

[Beverly Jane]

Wow, I like it. No matter who you are and what you are going through you can relate to it. I like the flow of the words and how natural they are. Very beautiful.