My Lover

My Lover

A Poem by Elyralune
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~You should know the world is cruel.

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You should know the world is cruel.
It bleeds good dry;
Destroys valiant souls
Inserts fear where courage once was.
As devastating as life can be,
You are the cliche that
keeps my heart beating.
Your laugh is the relief in a thousand
  sighs - your smile outshines the sun.
Your fingers intertwined with mine:
they are my safety, my anchor,
  my courage to find love.
I can feel your eyes follow me
as I walk among a crowd -
I forget to breathe when I
see that you've taken your barriers
down;

your face is exquisite -
Your eyes demand my truth -
the kiss of your lips heal all my wounds.
You are my forever cliche,
trapped in the beauty of the moon.

© 2017 Elyralune


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I enjoyed this poem. Had feel of the ancient writers and the words. Truthful and wise.
"your face is exquisite -
Your eyes demand my truth -
the kiss of your lips heal all my wounds.
You are my forever cliche,
trapped in the beauty of the moon."
I loved the above lines. Left the reader in a good place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elyralune

6 Years Ago

Thank you!! Im so glad the ending worked out. My original ending lines didnt flow or make a whole lo.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome.



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A courageous heart beating... Exquisite tears on a face behind a barrier of truth... Like a kiss to heal the wound, this soothed my eyes upon reading... Nicely penned...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Damn. Coming down out off those very same feelings, it really reverberates with me. I mean, in a sad way, but what is the purpose of poetry if not to make one feel?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome, i enjoyed this amazing work

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed this poem. Had feel of the ancient writers and the words. Truthful and wise.
"your face is exquisite -
Your eyes demand my truth -
the kiss of your lips heal all my wounds.
You are my forever cliche,
trapped in the beauty of the moon."
I loved the above lines. Left the reader in a good place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elyralune

6 Years Ago

Thank you!! Im so glad the ending worked out. My original ending lines didnt flow or make a whole lo.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome.
this is wonderful...really amazing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 16, 2017
Last Updated on December 3, 2017
Tags: love, heart, beat, desire, lust, safety, harbor, anchor, sun, smile, breathe, beauty, romance, valiant, courage, relief, cliche

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Elyralune
Elyralune

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A cliché, I may present: ~ a phoenix, rising from the ashes, glorious in all it's radiant colors with sparks of gold, streamers of red, with orange shimmering, dancing in the mix. Cl.. more..

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