Create Me

Create Me

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

Create me
As I stand before you.

Draw the very lips
You wish to fall in love with.
Pop in the eyes that
Will always leave you in a daze.
Mold out the curves that
You would love to touch.
The perfect tongue that
Could gracefully caress yours with each kiss.

Create me
As I stand before you.
I'm all yours.
Just yours.

© 2014 I Am Svetlana

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Absolutely beautiful work! It feels weightless, but has so much depth.
We are all shaped by the people around us, but willing for it to happen or being conscious of it implies a whole other experience. The sort of love you feel here is made clear, and I'm sure all those who have felt this form of love recognize it immediately.
Thanks for sharing this!

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


I could picture the molding of a love. There is a simplisitc pleasure to reading this because the simple words hold so much meaning to someone who has experienced or longed to experience the emotions presented in this. Thank you for reviewing my work and I'm sure ill spend a lot of time enjoying yours

Posted 9 Years Ago

I Am Svetlana

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful and thoughtful review :) I thought of a wax doll or Barbie when I wrote.. read more
How beautiful it is, to be created by the one you love...
Very artistic write here my friend, it seems through your words, sculpture comes alive,
but it is you, alive.... fantastic.

- Elisa

Posted 9 Years Ago

wow how symbolic.. one of the greatest poems I've read! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Love this, and so many ways to interpret it.


I love the possibilities. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

This reminds me of Ellie Goulding's. "The Writer"
Lets see...
Anywho, I like this like I like that song.
A lot!
Well done. ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago

You have given every reader the gift of a perfect lover and then proclaim it is only for the reader and no one else! This is fantastic and it can be viewed in difderent ways too, i just love the fact that you let us fill in the blanks. Fantastic!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Another awesome poem. Succinct and awesome. The writing effortlessly forces the imagination of the reader to adhere to your sensuously portrayed image.

Cool write.

Thanks for sharing.


Posted 9 Years Ago

I like it. Giving the complete self over. Total submission

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wow, this was a very good read. I really like the detail you put into it, "Create me, as I stand before you" somehow it reminds me of The Sims, but in a more romantic way.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Sam Ryann

9 Years Ago

It reminded me of the sims since I was playing the game earlier, I can see now how it could be about.. read more
I Am Svetlana

9 Years Ago

I've played the second game a few times, but don't play them so much anymore :/ I'm not super good a.. read more
Sam Ryann

9 Years Ago

I'm terrible at the game unless I have the cheat codes for it so I can have more money than I'd usua.. read more

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Added on June 1, 2014
Last Updated on June 1, 2014


I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

Madison, WI

"If you cannot write well; you cannot think well; if you cannot think well, other's will do your thinking for you." -Oscar Wilde Hello all, my name is Emily Svetlana! I am 30 years old and wo.. more..


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