Taking Glory

Taking Glory

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

They laugh at me

I flash them a smile.

For we both know who was right

In this case.

I smile because

I have proved them wrong.

They laugh because

They think they have won the battle.

For they don't know

I have ways to sneak around

And snatch the win.

This win is mine

And I take your glory.

© 2010 I Am Svetlana


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i like this. it's really good



Posted 14 Years Ago


Another short one, another basic one, another pure one, another great 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I liked it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Joe
I really like this poem. you have a great rhythm and word choice. Great job! Keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice. 'sneak around and snatch the win' I love this line. And with this poem, the glory is yours.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the sly slinky feel of this piece. It is almost serpentine. I like the expression of a smile it almost seems conniving especially as you speak of giving a false sense of security to your opponent. Nice flow love the feel . Keep writing !

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 9, 2010
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I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

Madison, WI



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"If you cannot write well; you cannot think well; if you cannot think well, other's will do your thinking for you." -Oscar Wilde Hello all, my name is Emily Svetlana! I am 30 years old and wo.. more..

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