Revived

Revived

A Poem by Yani De Los Reyes
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First poem I wrote when I was in Grade 4!! The most tragic year of my life.

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I saw nothing but the dark
Nothing but eternal blackness
I felt so alone and cold
Trapped in this icy abyss

Nowhere to return or go
In no place to hide
I'm a lost soul in the dark
Sadness is what I feel inside

I was gone forever
I died from the day
Woke up in the night
To see nothing

When all hope was lost
When my world has been killed
When I was about to die again
A small light has shown itself

Surprised to see this little one
Innocent it seems
And yet so powerful
Its warmth spreads all around

"Oh little light, please help me
Please save me from this cold
Please share some warmth
So that I can live once more"

The little light responded
Its light grew and grew
"Come here and join me"
Then I followed the light

Blinding it was to see
So much brightness
But I knew something
That this light has done to me

It pulled me from the dark
And put me back in the line
When I died in that place,
I revived in a new world

© 2010 Yani De Los Reyes


Author's Note

Yani De Los Reyes
This is a poem I still remembered when I was still in the 4th grade. ^_^ I found it in one of the papers scattered in my room XD

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Wow, this is a really nice poem. Even when you were younger, you were a very good poet. This is a nice poem indeed. Good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Yani. A beautiful poem. That light. You are the one who chooses it. You know what can pull you up. Or maybe life holds a surprise. You'll never know who or what that light may be. :)

Mimi

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Posted 14 Years Ago


You were a very good writer then. You wrote a poem with a purpose. I like the hope at the end. We struggle to find purpose and goals. Must go forward and not allow the defeatist to steal our hope. A excellent poem.

Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Yani De Los Reyes
Yani De Los Reyes

Quezon City, National Capital Region, Philippines



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I'm a 12 year old girl turning 13 after 3 more months. I'm a person just like you. Ordinary yet special in the eyes of the Creator. Making Art is my passion and writing is one of my most favorites. An.. more..

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