breathless

breathless

A Poem by Emily B
"

another walk

"

I feel you closer.

Colorful flashes

of brilliant light

haunt waking hours.

The vagaries

of your nearness

are too much to whisper

except

you make me breathless.

© 2009 Emily B


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Oh this is beautiful. A pleasant surprise after dem lukewarm pieces...hehe ;-)
Seems as though although the moon is no longer shining, the dawn simply brings insomniac induced visions of the last evenings activities. The leaping Cheshire leopard! The hypnotic spooks, made magical by alluring moonbeams! A poets memories. And shooting stars. Ahh, yes. A quote may rouse me, but trepidation seems to be your breathless aphrodisiac!
A great contemplative piece!

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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Too much to whisper. These are powerful words to me. Superb use of words like "flashes" and "haunt". Does the job of a hundred words in a few!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a wonderfully, lovingly written poem, it mists with emotion and that last line is magic, ' you make me breathless.

Few words, few lines - big, beautiful meaning.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'vagaries of your nearness'..:)..almost like a sweet whisper uttered into your loved one's ears midst loving and passion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful! And what a wonderful feeling you convey, the joy of love, and feeling of waiting for him....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i wondering how many of us man things are smiling over this

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Claps. What a moment.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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. i know you have a magic wand ... this is such a lucid and sheer spell ... unbelievable but not from you ... :) ...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautifully expressed Emily

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Emily B

Richmond, KY



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