Never Again

This isnt really a poem just a rant.

You screwed me over once

I forgave you.

I helped you when you needed it.

I believed in you.

So where the hell

did you get the balls

to screw me over again?!

Just so you know

there wont be a third time.

The trust you gave away

Is gone forever now.

You must be okay with that

because you gave it away for so little.

I dont want revenge

but you brought it on yourself.

Because after this no one will ever trust you.

Not ever again.

 

Author's Note

I wrote this when I was just really mad at someone and now that its over I kinda feel bad for the guy......

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

Some girl last name Swift, has been reading your poem,Never Ever.

[Adam :P]

that reminds me of me and my gf, i got revenge cuz she did something to get revenge just went in circles. can relate to this. good job!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a wise lady. Old saying. One time is a mistake. Two times you are a fool and three times your a dummy. Some people don't appreciate the good things they have till it is gone. And rarely can change. In the end I believe the people who honest and try to do the right things. Find something worthwhile. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Anicca]

It's a horrible feeling when you forgive someone and let them back in to just have them hurt you again, you have made a very wise decision by not letting them in for a third time. Well written, thanks for sharing.

[James Johnson]

it seems like you were pretty hurt when you wrote this. I can relate to that. Nice Poem
:)

[Ethan Paz]

Well, you can sense the emotion. Mixed feelings in this poem. Good job.

[Orlando Murcia]

Oh well he deserved it

if he hurt you

This was a great way to express
yourself


Great write

[karmic]

I always thought of ranting as a way to vent, and that’s exactly what you did. Amazing feeling, great piece.

[Obscure Meaning]

Its great :) And in a way works effectively was a poem since it uses few poetic devices such as rhyme. That way it comes across more pure and true emotion, which after all any poet or writer wants to convey. For giving the ability to a reader to see this shows real openness and testament to your writing ability :)

Obscureness Out

Well, its a pretty good rant :)