A Poem by Emily Feret

I had to write a poem for class where we take our audience through the senses of something; how something tastes and feels and such, this is what I came up with




The room is still spinning, which reminds me of last night

Where after the Patron I was at one with the Earth and felt its rotation


I say my hangover gives me powers

Like I’ve been bitten by a radioactive spider

Give me a mask, and I’ll save the world.


For instance my eyes can barely stand the light of the sun pouring in my window

I know I am seeing every beam and ray

I once read there is no such thing as dark

Dark is only the absence of light

Profound thoughts that make my head hurt now.


My ears can’t stand the sound

Stop yelling

I bet I could hear you talk about me a mile away


Too early for a drink?

Then don’t kiss my mouth

Love won’t be the only thing you’ll be drunk off of



© 2015 Emily Feret

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
I love how the last line changes the whole perspective of the piece, exceptional :)

Posted 5 Years Ago

Emily Feret

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much!

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


1 Review
Added on April 1, 2015
Last Updated on April 1, 2015
Tags: drink, alcohol, drunk, hungover, hangover, writing, poetry


Emily Feret
Emily Feret


My name is Emily Jeanne and I am 21 years old. I have always been one to stand firmly for everything I believe in, and everything I do, I do with a passion that I hope never fades. I have always strov.. more..

Zeus Zeus

A Poem by Emily Feret

Cavern Cavern

A Poem by Emily Feret