Butterfly Wings

Butterfly Wings

A Poem by ***The Lost***

My first poem<3 :3


Gentle hues and vibrant flutters,

waltz along the fields of dreams.

Base of sapphire,

and lines of black

paint the glorious wings.

Roses, lilies, and any between are a feast.


Sweet nectar of passion,

courses through me.

I watch its fluttering dance.

Floating among the dandilions,

is its power.


Beauty of innocence,

beauty of passion,

beauty of love

is its gifts.


For from the earth it came

and in the earth it shall lay.






© 2013 ***The Lost***

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I love this one. It has a very beautiful flow to it, and I really enjoyed reading this. Great job. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

I love this!! It is a very beautiful poem! Keep it up! :) 100/100
-Invizzy XD

Posted 8 Years Ago

Very beautiful, I feel as if I have a emotional tie to this. This is wonderful, I love it. Extremely great job. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

So lovely. I feel as if I can actually see the butterfly!

I've always loved those little creatures. So elegant :)

Wonderful write! I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I just want to thank you all for your kind words!

Posted 8 Years Ago

this is beautifull!! looking forward to read more stuff from you keep it up :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it !

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

***The Lost***

8 Years Ago

Thank you!!! :3

8 Years Ago

Your welcome do you think you could review some of my writing and tell me how I'm doing please .
***The Lost***

8 Years Ago

Sure, it wouldn't be a problem.
I love this!

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


8 Years Ago

Well it was great! For your first
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***The Lost***

8 Years Ago

It feels me with joy to hear your praise. I will write more, but for now I will wait for my muse. Th.. read more

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Added on January 8, 2013
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