Madness

Darkest Mind

Shadows dance before my eyes;
Unknown voices whisper into my ears.
Eyes seem to watch my every movement.

The harder I pull away
The deeper it pulls me in.
Tricks and traps
Control my every step.

I am lost.
Lost in in a place of
Darkness,
Influence,
And Mayhem.

The battle is over,
For the madness has triumphed.
Nothing left of my mind,
But the ever swirling colors of insanity.

Author's Note

I am back and crazier then over.
It seems this Mad Hatter has finally gone Mad.

Reviews

[The Invisible Girl]

Another great poem!!! :D 100/100

[The Nameless]

Great way of describing what you see and feel =D

[Diasha]

I like it ^^
I like how you use the last line to describe it.

[♪Barklight♪]

This. Poem. Is........ Awesome! XD (yep, a lot of people seem to be going mad lately...)

[Felecia]

Woot! *pumps fists into the air* Thank you Mad Hatter, I seriously needed this. Maddness and violence, blood etc. get me seriously hyper, and I needed this.
Okay first off...you picked the perfect picture for this poem. You've gotten my vote for all of this, just because you used Stein (he's my favourite in Soul Eater. My friend called me L Stein [Since my name begins with a L and I love Stein ahaha])
This is a fantastic poem and I just LOVEd reading it. The discription and the well...maddness was put in perfect amounts. This was well written and fantastic.
Good job!

[falling_toxic_rain]

Really like the last stanza.
Like how you paint vivid pictures with words.

[Time's The Bond]

I give that one 100% that is AMAZING and so true