Forever My Love

Forever My Love

A Poem by ***The Lost***

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My world is incomplete without you.
The tears just keep falling.
It was too soon for you to go.
You and I were suppose to make it until the end of time.

We were to have more memories.
Your smile brought me joy
And you voice banished my sorrows.

We walked hand in hand that day.
Our lips brought warmth to each other.
After our short lived moment of joy,
We whispered sweet words to each other
And promised to see each other tomorrow.

It came and swept you away from me.
It happened so fast.
I screamed your name,
But it didn't change the way things happened.
You were gone instantly.

Without warning death took you swiftly.
You my beautiful love were destroyed beyond recognition.
In front my eyes you were taken away.
It was like all the despair of my nightmares placed in one moment.

Why so soon?
Why at that moment?
Why in that way?

No one will ever compare to you.
My heart will forever be yours.
Your memory is branded into my heart.
I know you watch over me from above,
But that brings no joy to me.
I can't wait for when we are together again.

© 2013 ***The Lost***

Author's Note

***The Lost***
In memory of my love Aurora Grey, whose car was crushed by an oncoming train. I wish I had her stay, maybe then we could have stayed together. O' how I miss her so... Sorry but my keyboard is covered in tears, this is so hard for me.

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It's really sad but at the same time really beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago

It's really hard to deal with death, I loved how you put your emotions into such a beautiful poem. I'm sorry, and thank you for such a moving read.

Posted 7 Years Ago

oh it's really hard to let go of someone you love a lot! nice work

Posted 7 Years Ago

I'm so sorry....
You poem was so heartfelt.
It's really hard to lose someone you love.
Time heals all wounds, but scars always remain....

Posted 7 Years Ago

That is utterly terrible. I am so sorry for what you have been through. I can feel the pain, and passion in this poem. Although, I know I can't ever know how you feel. I am so sorry.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Oh, gosh, how dreadful. this is so sad, I'm so sorry for your loss.

Posted 7 Years Ago

... Im not crying....
I'm so sorry.

Posted 7 Years Ago

I'm so sorry for your loss. :( This is a beautiful tribute to her. *hugs*

Posted 7 Years Ago

Oh, gosh, this is really deep.
I can just imagine how hard this must be for you

You really described your feelings well in this poem

Great job and good luck, hope you feel better soon =D

Posted 7 Years Ago

This is really sad but sweet! Great poem. :) 100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on February 3, 2013
Last Updated on February 4, 2013


***The Lost***
***The Lost***

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