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A Pull Not A Shove

A Pull Not A Shove

A Poem by ***The Lost***
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I'm back. A second wind unlike no other has hit me and I will be writing once again.

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Saying I love you is never enough,
I will spare no little amount to show you how much I care.
If I must I will leave my heart open and bare
even when things are rough.
I will sell my soul 
if it meant us being together until the end.
As if we were paint on a canvas a delicate blend.
I would pay any necessary toll.
For you are my love.
You stop time and hold my breath,
and help me keep away the thoughts of self-committed death.
You are a pull from life and not death's shove.
So while I stand nothing will ever harm you or us.
 I will be your guardian and you my angel.

© 2013 ***The Lost***


Author's Note

***The Lost***
I'm back after a few dark weeks. Things seem to be going great for me.

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As a male, I have to say that this made me realize how sweet some love can truly be. If I could come up with some sweet, and tender loving words like that, I'd be set.

Great job on the writing, and it's very well done.

Lee

Posted 7 Years Ago


awww... a total pledge of love i love it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful, really. I'm really glad that you have someone who can make you this happy =D
Great poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This was wonderful. A pull not a shove, brilliant!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like the positive feeling it has :]
It's really cute too ^^


Posted 7 Years Ago


I'm glad things are going good for you. :D I'd like to say this reminds me of a certain prologue to a certain story...;) I absolutely adore the grace in this, it definitely reminds me of an angel. I also liked the format of the poem, it's very flowing.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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***The Lost***
***The Lost***

Hearts No More, LA



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