A Pull Not A Shove

A Pull Not A Shove

A Poem by ***The Lost***
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I'm back. A second wind unlike no other has hit me and I will be writing once again.

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Saying I love you is never enough,
I will spare no little amount to show you how much I care.
If I must I will leave my heart open and bare
even when things are rough.
I will sell my soul 
if it meant us being together until the end.
As if we were paint on a canvas a delicate blend.
I would pay any necessary toll.
For you are my love.
You stop time and hold my breath,
and help me keep away the thoughts of self-committed death.
You are a pull from life and not death's shove.
So while I stand nothing will ever harm you or us.
 I will be your guardian and you my angel.

© 2013 ***The Lost***


Author's Note

***The Lost***
I'm back after a few dark weeks. Things seem to be going great for me.

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As a male, I have to say that this made me realize how sweet some love can truly be. If I could come up with some sweet, and tender loving words like that, I'd be set.

Great job on the writing, and it's very well done.

Lee

Posted 11 Years Ago


awww... a total pledge of love i love it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful, really. I'm really glad that you have someone who can make you this happy =D
Great poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was wonderful. A pull not a shove, brilliant!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the positive feeling it has :]
It's really cute too ^^


Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm glad things are going good for you. :D I'd like to say this reminds me of a certain prologue to a certain story...;) I absolutely adore the grace in this, it definitely reminds me of an angel. I also liked the format of the poem, it's very flowing.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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***The Lost***
***The Lost***

Hearts No More, LA



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