Darkness

Darkness

A Poem by Wonderland Asylum

The breeze brushed her hair,

as she sat on the docks of the ocean

watching as the waves climbed up the rocks

as her love, her care casts itself farther away from her


As she turns to walk away from the edge, as her black dress slips

effortlessly into the darkness

she hears her name, but she has heard it too many times to want to listen to the voice calling.

she keeps walking further into the darkness


Her hope had been lost,

her care no longer lived,

and as for her love

she had none left.

the light she once felt was gone

it was cast away like everything else.


like her love,

her care,

and the only hope she had ever felt and will ever feel again.

and yet when she turned back to the dock,

the black waves still climbing up the rocks.

the dock still rotting from age,

and her still standing,

letting the darkness consume her.

© 2017 Wonderland Asylum


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A amazing poem dear friend. Reminded me of the Leonard Cohen song "Suzanne". The sea and a lone woman. Most time. Waiting and hoping. The sea can seen cold and heartless. She is. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


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A amazing poem dear friend. Reminded me of the Leonard Cohen song "Suzanne". The sea and a lone woman. Most time. Waiting and hoping. The sea can seen cold and heartless. She is. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This reminds me of a Pierce The Veil vibe. Just completely feeling and not being afraid to feel it. F*****g genius

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The sadness in your poems is almost tangible.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

f*****g a this I love letting the darkness consume her devour every bit of her being one who tempts the darkness is devoured into the whole of oblivon

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Wonderland Asylum
Wonderland Asylum

Reedley, CA



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Alternative, shy, loves music. I typically keep to myself, and am not very expressive. But when I write, it's like I'm some place else. I've been gone for a while, and I'm working on getting back.. more..

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