OverThrown

Feelings came over me like a

storm for you.

Haven’t felt this storm in

A few years now.

Wanted to get close to you

but stuck viewing and admiring from afar.

Thought you had felt something

As well.

Why else would you have started

talking to me?

Unless, of course, your intentions

were impure.  Simply moving from one subject to another.

Thought that this would actually

become something Great.

Unfortunately you had Different plans.

Told me things I didn’t realize I Wanted to hear.

The way you Held me, I felt so

Safe, so Secure.

Your Actions covered up your Thoughts.

Made me feel like a Girl Who Was Wanted .

Caused me, who used to be such a Queen, who

Didn’t Need a King,

Caused my Own heart,

to be

OverThrown.

Reviews

[C. Lee Battaglia]

"Your Actions covered up your Thoughts.
Made me feel like a Girl Who Was Wanted .
Caused me, who used to be such a Queen, who
Didn’t Need a King,
Caused my Own heart,
to be
OverThrown."

This was a very heartfelt poem! It was so relatable! I love your writing style. It's unique and it hooks the reader start to finish! You have a talent and it should be shared with everyone! You are one of the best writers that I've come across on this sight! keep up the incredible work!

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

[Wonderland Asylum]

C. Lee Battaglia, thank-you so much!
It means a lot to me when you say that I'm one of the best writers that you've come across. In my own eyes, I'm a mere amature at writing, so your kind words are very much appreciated!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

I really meant it! You are very welcome! And thanks once again for your incredible poetry!

[Mrudula Rani]

When you meet some one that rocks your world and occupies all of your thoughts through the storms they create, an innocent girl is bound to feel over thrown from her own heart. Beautiful writing. I enjoyed reading your poem. All the best.