Friend

your one of the best:

genereal

no other is like you

you give good advice.

you never leave my side

good times or bad.

your the best i have.

your my friend.

 

Never any bad:

 

its never bad times

its always good

laughing

not crying

helping

not fighting.

your my helping hand when i need one.

your my smile when all i can do is frown.

 

Helping hand;

 

you help me through the rough times.

when i need to be tough.

like a soldier needing first aid.

you some to my recsue

no matter what

 

friends:

thank you for the help.

thank you for the laughs

thank you for sharing your stories.

and for listening to mine.

we understand eachother.

but someone need to know more.

how bout this?

lets be friends?

 

 

Author's Note

* VERY VERY rough copy*
please help me make this poem better!
any suggestions will be nice and be considered

Reviews

[Jason]

I love this the way it is honestly. I think that you broke down your love for your friends into four sections...and did it in such a wonderful way...., I mean...I enjoyed it. I don't know about anyone else and what type of suggestions they might give you...but I think you should leave it the way it is....this, in my opinion is great the way it is. Like I said, I love it!

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your my helping hand when i need one.
your my smile when all i can do is frown.
Helping hand;

I like it alot, you say it with true friendship,friends lend a helping hand and its always better to smile than frown, good write