You are human

A short poem

You are human, when you are happy
With a little bit resources.
You are the human, when you walk
For some honest purposes.

You are human, when you think
For not only thyself,
But also for the welfare of whole universe
And to creatures try to help!!!

You are really human, when you are
Determined to be a gracious.
You are human, when you, yes you
Never be bad ambitious.

You are human, when you think
That you have no loneliness!!!
You are human, when you
Have no ability to touch the greediness!!!

If you have done any contrary of these,
You never be a human, think fresh, please!!!

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems, please.

Reviews

[Quill]

if you define attributes of being human as indulging in positive activities, then there are handful of people who have proven you wrong over the years. And there are also others who would not change no matter how many exclamation marks you put behind your poem. that being said i actually like your poem.