key to my heart

key to my heart

A Poem by Janice Fronek(red.panda)

Suicide upon, the thought I couldn't control
Your mine was set, my heart was broken
But how could I stand to let go?
I drove you insane as my heart was frozen

Should have listen when I had the chance
Now it's to late to go back to those days
As much as it hurts I still want that chance
Even with being unloved and in your broken ways

I'm the insanity thats in your mind
Youre my broken piece to my heart
The time we had can't be unwind
But those memories are nothing but hurt

I say I'll wait but that'll be a lie
Cause my love for you will just die

© 2016 Janice Fronek(red.panda)


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This is decent. I don't like almost all the last words to it though. They just don't fit together. It makes it seem very chopped up.

Posted 4 Years Ago


A very sad poem my friend.
"But how could I stand to let go?
I drove you insane as my heart was frozen"
A frozen heart is locked-up and shall learn too late. Love was near. A strong flow of thoughts led to a realistic ending. Thank you for sharing the powerful words.
Coyote


Posted 4 Years Ago



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Janice Fronek(red.panda)
Janice Fronek(red.panda)

antigo, WI



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Hello there my name is Janice Fronek. I had been writing for five years now and I had been very successful in writing. I am very over protective of my writing and the format that I write in. My favo.. more..

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