Beauty and the beast

Beauty and the beast

A Poem by Janice Fronek(red.panda)



She wasnt afaird of the demons that cursed the beast
She seen his love underneath all the mess
Misunderstood by many but beauty loved the beast
No one understood her love for the beast so they had to guess

She holds his love so close not even he could understand
The beast was lost of words from beauty's love
He gives her a rose, as he sets it in her hand
He speaks "this rose is held together by our love"

Never letting his rose fall apart she breaks his curse
She was his beauty, his love he will always have
love for one of another was for the best, wasnt for the worse
As Their love grows together, no one could understand what they have

With two different lives their love was meant to be
Still most don't understand or can see

© 2018 Janice Fronek(red.panda)


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I love your poem restating the lessons of this movie/story in your own words. I get the feeling you might be learning to use rhyme, which makes this poem feel more crafted than freeflowing from the heart. Little by little, with practice, you will be able to incorporate rhyme and still express yourself in an uninhibited way. This is an impressive effort to sustain this rhyming poetic style thru a longer poem (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


the rhyming is perfect
i love anything about fairy tales and childhood stories
well done love this

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Janice Fronek(red.panda)
Janice Fronek(red.panda)

antigo, WI



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Hello there my name is Janice Fronek. I had been writing for five years now and I had been very successful in writing. I am very over protective of my writing and the format that I write in. My favo.. more..

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