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All Because Of You

All Because Of You

A Poem by JenLyn

Listen to the breath of my heart

The beat of my soul

It’s all for you,

You’ve turned me gold.

 

My soul no longer echoes.

Eyes no longer rain.

Cause of you I’ve stepped

Out of the shade.

 

My mind no longer hates

My lips no longer curse.

All because of you,

All because of you!

Life no longer hurts.

 

 

© 2018 JenLyn


Author's Note

JenLyn
Not my best work but it was what I was feeling at the moment.

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Subtle yet poignant and sharp like a small blade.
For some reason it picked up pace from the second stanza
onwards and the second stanza stands out in an impressive way.
Reading your words you can almost feel the beat of someone's heart and the breath of someone in the reader's arms.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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this is so lovely..you had all that effect on me..
i see colors never seen before..i dream of worlds and see it like all magical
you made me feel everything in different looks and shapes
even the air around me smells nice ,a smell never used to it before
you enhanced every sense i me..i feel no end to what i could do and resolve
its all because of you..only you
lovely write..

Posted 10 Years Ago


thisseemed to be lovefilled and love that covets you of all hate...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very touching I like it, nice work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aww i like this
Great Job

Posted 10 Years Ago


i feel the emotion. good poem :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ahhh this is a heart felt poem it could be a Paramore song

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice, maybe i'll find someone who makes me feel like that.

Until then, to the Rum! haha.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So emotional. I can really feel it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Subtle yet poignant and sharp like a small blade.
For some reason it picked up pace from the second stanza
onwards and the second stanza stands out in an impressive way.
Reading your words you can almost feel the beat of someone's heart and the breath of someone in the reader's arms.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So raw but beautiful, nice job!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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JenLyn

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