All Because Of You

Listen to the breath of my heart

The beat of my soul

It’s all for you,

You’ve turned me gold.

 

My soul no longer echoes.

Eyes no longer rain.

Cause of you I’ve stepped

Out of the shade.

 

My mind no longer hates

My lips no longer curse.

All because of you,

All because of you!

Life no longer hurts.

 

 

Author's Note

Not my best work but it was what I was feeling at the moment.

Reviews

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

Subtle yet poignant and sharp like a small blade.
For some reason it picked up pace from the second stanza
onwards and the second stanza stands out in an impressive way.
Reading your words you can almost feel the beat of someone's heart and the breath of someone in the reader's arms.

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

Well i surely feel the passion and the emotion.

[Joy Lynn B.]

Aw this is SO cute!

[Daffy Lello]

I agree. It is very peaceful, and it is nice to read a calm piece that still holds a lot of emotion. I especially like the power in the repeated line in the last stanza. Very moving piece.

[lamia]

it's very nice as always , a beautiful , peaceful piece ...

[Madana Dookieram]

very peaceful. i like it very much -

[Frantzuu]

wow this is a very pieceful poem u wrote there. I like it a lot. The last stanza is puperb, great write like always. I think this is a great poem even though you don't write stuff like that lol :D u're awesome!!

[The Water Queen]

I enjoyed this poem very much. It was simple and sweet and just full of devotion to the person you are writing about. Great job!

[Nirmala]

I enjoyed the last verse, so true when someone has a positive impact in your life hate is removed and life does not hurt, how beautifully expressed! Eyes no longer rain, cause of you I 've stepped out of the shade! It expresses how another can make one blossom!

[Art]

Even when we least expect it...we expose our thoughts that grasp us when we need to express how truly we do feel...

nicely written thoughts through poem...

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

*My soul no longer echoes*. I love that line. You did an awesome job.
Writing feelings on the spot never impress the writer, but there is a
connection the reader always craves more of. This poem was great.